**Spoilers Be Here**
This is one of the few books I remember adding to my Goodreads list. I was at Union Station in Denver, waiting for a table at Snooze with my sisters and mom. There's a bookstore across from the restaurant, so we went inside and browsed while we waited, and the cover of this book caught my attention. Then our table was ready and my sister announced she's pregnant and my mom started crying (tears of joy) and scared the waitstaff....good times.
I would like to say that I loved this book, but I didn't, and I can't quite put my finger on why but I'm about to try! I usually really like, if not love, time travel. The story was entertaining enough; I especially liked that Kin's great-grandson ends up saving him in the end, which I probably should have seen coming. (Side note: I read Kin's name as Kim for about 20 pages.) But it just didn't resonate. Maybe it needed more world building? I suppose there weren't too many differences between the present and future, though. Maybe it was the characters....yes, I think that's it.
My biggest issue was with Penny. How is she just ok with everything that happens in her life (with the exception of how her parents treat her)? Your fiance has another family, and that's just fine? I know the circumstances are extremely unusual but she barely struggles to come to terms with it which is so unrealistic. Everyone else was also fairly boring and flat; no one seemed to have any real flaws (again, with the exception of Penny's parents) and acted exactly as you'd expect them to so there wasn't any real excitement.
The writing also wasn't fantastic, but I can't recall a specific part that I can point out; I just have a general feeling that it could have been written better. I think at one point Kin mentioned a year had passed between his time travels; what? I legitimately thought it was a month at the most. If it was a year, the book needed to be quite a bit longer so we could really get into his emotional journey and learn more about the supporting cast.
All in all, it was an entertaining enough time travel tale, and I was curious how the story would wrap up, but everything just needed to be fleshed out more.
Completed: 2 December 2020
Rating: 2.5/5
Recommend: If you're looking for a light, quick, and easy time travel story, sure

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